That was absolutely wonderful. I can't wait to see what happens next. I really liked the way you portrayed Mirage in this chapter. i also caught that little part you snuck in there. "Authentic" indeed. i have seen both of those videos and think they are hilarious.
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Date: 2009-12-28 09:01 am (UTC)Keep up the great work! This story is fabulous!