I hope it wasn't the fic itself you found laughable, just Skywarp's cheesy porn dialogue - I'm always kind of simultaneously laughing and cringing as I write it, because it's so IC, and yet so lame. 'Warp's no Shakespeare, that's for damn sure. I think it's only his utter sincerity that saves it - the things he says are hardly deep or original sentiments, but he means them, and that counts for a lot. ;)