http://astersyn.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] astersyn.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] anon_decepticon 2010-02-11 02:34 am (UTC)

Geez, Wheeljack thinks way too hard about everything. Worrying and obsessing over little details! He needs to step back and look at the bigger picture.
Also: getting pissed at Ratchet for being too nice? Don't look a gift horse in the mouth, fella, especially if that horse swings a hell of a wrench.

I love how you're able to get so much out of just someone's thought processes. Most of what happens in this chapter is just Wheeljack thinking, but it's still as engaging as the more action-y bits.

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