Yikes! Glad to hear you're okay. You recovering all right?
And now, the reaction: Ohmigawd. Ohmigawd. *flail* Two chapters left? It'll be sad to see this one end, but at the same time it's been so masterfully handled from the very start and I can't wait to see the resolution.
I loved the way you worked things out between Ratchet and Wheeljack in the last chapter. In the context of the whole story, it really works that they didn't wind up together romantically. So as much as I love that pairing, I'm glad you didn't go that route.
Starscream was perfect here. So much going on in that scene, so much happening with all three of them, it's hard to break it down but that whole thing... yeah. Two thumbs way up.
I also love that you're including Hoist in this, even if it's in a totally roundabout way.
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Date: 2010-03-26 06:35 am (UTC)And now, the reaction: Ohmigawd. Ohmigawd. *flail* Two chapters left? It'll be sad to see this one end, but at the same time it's been so masterfully handled from the very start and I can't wait to see the resolution.
I loved the way you worked things out between Ratchet and Wheeljack in the last chapter. In the context of the whole story, it really works that they didn't wind up together romantically. So as much as I love that pairing, I'm glad you didn't go that route.
Starscream was perfect here. So much going on in that scene, so much happening with all three of them, it's hard to break it down but that whole thing... yeah. Two thumbs way up.
I also love that you're including Hoist in this, even if it's in a totally roundabout way.