Sorry I didn't comment before! I was working on a chapter of the sequel and didn't want to take a break until I was done. Didn't mean to make you worry. :) Now, on to the review.
Skywarp should count his blessings. He could have been working with Wildrider and Drag Strip instead. But even though this chapter focused a lot on Thundercracker and Megatron, I loved how much you brought out Skywarp's personality - so many little details from the obsequious bow to the "yeah, that's how it's done, interfacing can involve touching your partner even if he's Megatron".
As for Thundercracker, he wasn't kidding when he said he thought a lot even during interfacing. The climax of the chapter, even after he realized that it could feel good with Megatron but was all DO NOT WANT... that was so stretched out that I was half afraid Megatron would finish without him.
But it ended happily! For everyone, since even Megatron got what he wanted. As for his little foreshadowing look... whatever that means, I think those two can handle it together.
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Date: 2010-06-01 11:01 am (UTC)Skywarp should count his blessings. He could have been working with Wildrider and Drag Strip instead. But even though this chapter focused a lot on Thundercracker and Megatron, I loved how much you brought out Skywarp's personality - so many little details from the obsequious bow to the "yeah, that's how it's done, interfacing can involve touching your partner even if he's Megatron".
As for Thundercracker, he wasn't kidding when he said he thought a lot even during interfacing. The climax of the chapter, even after he realized that it could feel good with Megatron but was all DO NOT WANT... that was so stretched out that I was half afraid Megatron would finish without him.
But it ended happily! For everyone, since even Megatron got what he wanted. As for his little foreshadowing look... whatever that means, I think those two can handle it together.
Thanks for a very enjoyable read!