sdlfjsladfkj!! <-- My reaction upon seeing that this had been updated.
Windcharger using his magnets! <3 I like that you integrate the different characters abilities like that.
Ratchet's reactions to the whole ordeal are spot on, the conflicting glad that it's over but at the same time unhappy with any death. That little tidbit about Hauler was perfectly placed.
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Date: 2012-02-20 09:25 pm (UTC)Windcharger using his magnets! <3 I like that you integrate the different characters abilities like that.
Ratchet's reactions to the whole ordeal are spot on, the conflicting glad that it's over but at the same time unhappy with any death. That little tidbit about Hauler was perfectly placed.