ext_75117 ([identity profile] lyricality.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] anon_decepticon 2009-06-20 03:07 pm (UTC)

I'm really enjoying this fic thus far--I was so glad to see it updated!--and I wanted to give you all the praise you deserve for never taking the easy road out of Wheeljack's difficult problem. Quite a lot of writers don't deal with the day-to-day emotional aftermath of a rape, and too often, a "perfect" sexual encounter with another character (usually The One) becomes an immediate cure for all the horrible aftereffects. Wheeljack's reactions here are far more realistic, and his lingering fear of and distaste for any kind of interfacing rings painfully true. Holding to such an honest representation of the situation requires a greater commitment from you as a writer, and I wanted to thank you for facing the challenge head-on.

This story has touched me in any number of ways, and I'm eagerly looking forward to more. ^_^

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