No matter how this eventually turns out, I love you so much for giving Trailbreaker an actual, major role and some real characterization. *Trailbreaker fan is very, very happy*
Oh Wheeljack. *wince* The poor guy is not making things any better for himself.
Also, in the last chapter, Ratchet's reaction was written very well. You did a good job of conveying his feelings to the reader even though Wheeljack is still massively (and convincingly) misreading things.
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Oh Wheeljack. *wince* The poor guy is not making things any better for himself.
Also, in the last chapter, Ratchet's reaction was written very well. You did a good job of conveying his feelings to the reader even though Wheeljack is still massively (and convincingly) misreading things.