ext_120208 ([identity profile] sister-dear.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] anon_decepticon 2009-06-22 02:29 am (UTC)

No matter how this eventually turns out, I love you so much for giving Trailbreaker an actual, major role and some real characterization. *Trailbreaker fan is very, very happy*

Oh Wheeljack. *wince* The poor guy is not making things any better for himself.

Also, in the last chapter, Ratchet's reaction was written very well. You did a good job of conveying his feelings to the reader even though Wheeljack is still massively (and convincingly) misreading things.

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