The scene with the Dinobots was hilarious. Slag wanted to be Slag, so Slag he was. - *lol* ^^
I like it how you balance between drama and humour. You place the humour at the right place, that it brightens the atmosphere, even if it’s just a tiny bit, but enough that I don’t become all drama myself.
Mud must be something that Cybertronians really dislike - and I guess - didn’t know until they came to earth. *g* Thanks for the scene in the washracks and that it ended pretty different than one might expect.
“Hound’s terrible,” Trailbreaker elaborated conversationally. “Don’t tell him I said so, but don’t ever let him do your back. He’ll take your paint off!” Poor Mirage. :p
I pity Trailbreaker. He seems to truly like Wheeljack. Somehow I see a big disaster coming… v.v And again the last sentence is pithy. I like this rhetorical device. I mean letting a chapter or story end with something that leaves a deep impression. :)
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Date: 2009-11-17 03:12 pm (UTC)Slag wanted to be Slag, so Slag he was. - *lol* ^^
I like it how you balance between drama and humour. You place the humour at the right place, that it brightens the atmosphere, even if it’s just a tiny bit, but enough that I don’t become all drama myself.
Mud must be something that Cybertronians really dislike - and I guess - didn’t know until they came to earth. *g*
Thanks for the scene in the washracks and that it ended pretty different than one might expect.
“Hound’s terrible,” Trailbreaker elaborated conversationally. “Don’t tell him I said so, but don’t ever let him do your back. He’ll take your paint off!”
Poor Mirage. :p
I pity Trailbreaker. He seems to truly like Wheeljack. Somehow I see a big disaster coming… v.v
And again the last sentence is pithy. I like this rhetorical device. I mean letting a chapter or story end with something that leaves a deep impression. :)