ext_120208 ([identity profile] sister-dear.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] anon_decepticon 2009-07-28 07:08 pm (UTC)

That was an evil cliffhanger. D:

This story is always so wonderfully well done. Okay, the fact that three of the most prominent characters happen to be among my favorites doesn't hurt, but even not counting that, there's excellent writing, characterisation, and handling of the subject. You've got me feeling a degree of empathy for all three of our current major players, even when they're at odds with each other, not to mention poor Bumblebee and Spike. One of the biggest tests of good writing is how the author handles the characters making mistakes, and so far you're passing with flying colors.

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