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iiskaa ([identity profile] aaaaaah.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] anon_decepticon 2009-11-27 05:36 pm (UTC)

Great chapter, definitely worth the wait. I liked the dream sequence at the beginning - it seemed appropriately dream-like without coming off as forced or overdone the way that type of scene often is. It looks like Trailbreaker's starting to catch on to things. Also, it's nice to see Wheeljack and Ratchet sort-of getting along again, by the end of the chapter.

Can't wait to see more! ;)

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